Friday, November 4, 2011

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Hey Kaitlyn, I thought your story was very interesting. I like all the names your characters had. I also like when you told parts of his childhood and described how everything felt. You had a few grammar errors but everything else is really great. Keep up the great work Kaitlyn!
http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/kaitlyng15/monkey/#comments


Hi Kordell, I thought your story was fascinating. I especially like when he finds friends on the way to his journey to find his father. You had some spelling errors but it was really good. Gary’s mom must have a really hard time. Keep up the great work!
http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/kordelld/gary-the-grape/#comment-90

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